Mind of Mine (C.F.E. Black) – Review + Giveaway

Posted 28 August 2019 by Katie in Review, Science Fiction, Speculative, Young Adult / 5 Comments

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Title: 
Mind of Mine
Author: 
C.F.E. Black
Genre: 
Young Adult Sci Fi
Publisher: 
Illuminate YA
Release date: 
7 August 2019
Pages: 
287

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Mind of Mine


About the Book

She is a genius . . . who frequently forgets her own name.

Raised to put science over self, V must link her brain with fifteen other people, making her one of the world’s smartest humans. With this privilege comes a life dedicated to continual research inside a secluded facility, a life devoid of freedom. 

But V is losing her identity and unable to predict which face will peer back at her from the nearest mirror. Escaping this life will mean freedom to think for herself—and abandoning everything and everyone she’s known and loved. 

When your thoughts and speech are no longer private, freedom comes at a price. But for V the price may be her life.

Excerpt

My fingertips tingle, as always, at the end of the mental exchange. The syringe-like cable extracts itself from my neck, leaving a sharp itch for just a moment. When the metal hood slides back, exposing my shaved head, the chill of the streaming room nips at my skull. I rub the back of my neck before sitting up, my fingers brushing the smooth scars that mark the sensors behind my ears. With a groan, I lurch my chest upward, reeling with the memories that have just been dumped into my mind.
    In the greenish light, I see the others in the room also start to reenter the here and now. Marcus is still down, his chest convulsing. From across the circle of reclining chairs, the sound of vomit sucking into a chute proves that I’m not the only one who still struggles with this exchange. Prudentia, stone-face and beautiful, is already standing. She’s borderline machine, that one.
    As I stand, I try to ignore the spinning in my head. Pru eyes me gripping the side of my chair for support. Marcus is rising, his arms boasting grooves and bulges as he pushes himself up. He sees me staring, and for just a moment longer, I wait to look away.
    All sixteen of us are standing now. Dr. Yamaguchi says in her hypnotic voice, “To whom much is given—”
    As one, we say, “—much is expected.”

Review

Wow! This one definitely sucked me in. I love it when speculative fiction explores a premise that seems to promise so many benefits—for example, overcoming our perceived shortcomings and limitations—but ends up demonstrating that the sacrifices made in the process actually de-humanize us rather than elevating us to a higher way of living.

The premise behind this story is that science has developed to a point where there are now Orders of genetically engineered people whose sole purpose in life is to research ways of improving human life (anti-aging, vaccines, etc). Once a week, these people undergo “streaming” within their own Order, meaning that their brains are connected via cable and all of their thoughts, knowledge, experiences, and emotions are downloaded into each other’s brains. In other words, nothing can be kept private. Even worse, it messes up any sense of individual self. But if it’s all for a greater good, a little sacrifice is worth it, isn’t it?

Aside from the premise itself, both the characterisation and the writing in this novel were fantastic, particularly considering C.F.E. Black is a debut author. The characters were complex and well thought out in terms of how their lifestyle would impact their interactions and emotional responses, and both the first-person present-tense POV and the overall writing style created exactly the right tone for the story.

If I were to be really nitpicky, the one thing I could say is that, once all was revealed at the end, I found myself feeling as though the big picture just didn’t quite hang straight. You know when a picture is more or less straight, but just off by a few millimetres? Like that. Instead of the reveals being “A-ha!” they felt a little bit more like, “Hmmm… Let me think about that for a minute.” For the most part, I think a little more foreshadowing would have made the difference, but I think there were also one or two elements of the world-building that could have been a little tighter.

But as I said, that’s a really nitpicky point to make, because this story really did have me hooked from cover to cover. I look forward to seeing more from this author!

I received a copy of this novel from the author. This has not influenced the content of my review, which is my honest and unbiased opinion.

About the Author

If you’re a teen, I work for you.
I write for you. I teach for you.

Seven days a week I seek to shine light into the world-darkened lives of young people, whether it be in a high school Spanish class, a youth group Sunday school class, or a coffee shop with my computer writing my next book.

I want my writing to be a bright spot on a dark shelf, a source of truth among many lies. You guys deserve books like this.

I live in north Alabama with my son, two droopy hound dogs, a cat named Sprinkles, and my superhero husband. No, really, he saved my life once. It’s a cool story.

If you want to know more about me, my writing, or my escapades as a teacher, please visit my blog.

Mind of Mine is my first novel.

Connect with C.F.E. Black:  Website  |  Facebook  |  Twitter  |  Pinterest  |  Instagram

Giveaway

One winner will receive a print copy of MIND OF MINE and a $25 Amazon gift card

US only

Ends September 4, 2019

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5 responses to “Mind of Mine (C.F.E. Black) – Review + Giveaway

  1. Amy M.

    I’m not really a Sci-Fi fan, but am trying to expand my reading horizons. This book looks like a good place to start.

    • It probably would be a good place to start. I’m not a great sci-fi fan either, but if a premise catches my interest, I’ll definitely read it!

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