Promised (Leah Garriott) – Review

Posted 8 March 2020 by Katie in Historical, Inspirational Fiction, Review, Romance / 1 Comment


Title: 
Promised
Author: 
Leah Garriott
Genre: 
Historical Romance
Publisher: 
Shadow Mountain Publishing
Release date: 
18 February 2020
Pages: 
368

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Promised


About the Book

Margaret Brinton keeps her promises, and the one she is most determined to keep is the promise to protect her heart.

Warwickshire, England, 1812

Fooled by love once before, Margaret vows never to be played the fool again. To keep her vow, she attends a notorious matchmaking party intent on securing the perfect marital match: a union of convenience to someone who could never affect her heart. She discovers a man who exceeds all her hopes in the handsome and obliging rake Mr. Northam.

There’s only one problem. His meddling cousin, Lord Williams, won’t leave Margaret alone. Condescending and high-handed, Lord Williams lectures and insults her. When she refuses to give heed to his counsel, he single-handedly ruins Margaret’s chances for making a good match—to his cousin or anyone else. With no reason to remain at the party, Margaret returns home to discover her father has promised her hand in marriage—to Lord Williams

Under no condition will Margaret consent to marrying such an odious man. Yet as Lord Williams inserts himself into her everyday life, interrupting her family games and following her on morning walks, winning the good opinion of her siblings and proving himself intelligent and even kind, Margaret is forced to realize that Lord Williams is exactly the type of man she’d hoped to marry before she’d learned how much love hurt. When paths diverge and her time with Lord Williams ends, Margaret is faced with her ultimate choice: keep the promises that protect her or break free of them for one more chance at love. Either way, she fears her heart will lose.

Excerpt

Mr. Northam met my gaze. “My cousin and I have something of a long-standing dispute, and I believe you may be the perfect person to answer it for us.”
    “Northam.” Lord Williams sounded irritated.
    Mr. Northam pressed on. “He argues that women prefer a man of manners and good breeding, and that is why women flock to him. I argue that it is only because of his title that anyone shows any interest in such a tedious and tiresome person. What is your opinion on the matter?”
    Lord Williams carefully set his spoon down. “You must excuse my cousin, Miss Brinton. He is worse than usual this evening, and I apologize that you are bearing the brunt of his beastliness.”
    Mr. Northam didn’t seem disconcerted by his cousin in the least. “Attempting to contain what he terms my ‘beastliness’ is the only reason he’s in attendance, much to the disappointment of many young women who rather hope to catch his eye—and his title.”
    “To be sure,” Lord Williams said, the sarcasm returning to his voice.
    “And will we count you among those disappointed, Miss Brinton?” Mr. Northam asked.
    They both seemed to wait for an answer. I set my spoon down. It was best to be clear about my intentions from the beginning; there was no point wasting time. “I am not in attendance seeking a title, a heart, or anything similar to romance. So, no, I will not be among the throng pestering his lordship for attention. Yet to answer the other part of the question . . .” I took a breath. “I sincerely hope that I will not leave disappointed. Indeed, I am full of hope that I may be counted among Mrs. Hickmore’s success stories by the end of the week.”
    Lord Williams studied me a moment before raising his gaze to his cousin. Again something passed between them. Whatever it was, Mr. Northam took on a determined air and leaned close enough to murmur, “You know, Miss Brinton, I believe we shall get on very well.”
    “I do hope so,” I murmured in return.

Review

I have to confess I struggled to warm to these characters, and for this character-driven reader, that presented a bit of a problem. In a broad sense this story was modelled after Pride and Prejudice, with the hero of the novel creating an unfavourable impression to begin with and the heroine’s opinion of the hero gradually transforming over the course of the story. So far so good—that’s a plot I love to see unfold. But for me, much of its success relies on being able to see the characters realise their flaws and grow as a result, and that didn’t happen for me in this book.

In the early parts of the story, both the hero and the heroine were ill-mannered, which made it even more important for me to see some personal growth. The heroine often came across as petulant, which definitely made me less sympathetic towards her. As this story was written entirely from the heroine’s point of view, it wasn’t until the end of the story that we fully understood the hero’s position, but even so, it didn’t explain the inconsistency in his behaviour towards Margaret at different points in the story. I felt that a well-mannered Regency gentleman would have handled things differently in many of the circumstances. And that goes for a well-mannered Regency lady, too.

The other difficulty I had was that several elements of the plot felt contrived for the sake of creating a specific emotion in the reader. Some of these elements echoed other Jane Austen novels, and while none of them were unrealistic in their own right, they didn’t always feel organic to the story. I thought perhaps the story could have been strengthened if one or two of the lesser plot threads had been removed to give the author room to develop the main plot more fully.

Overall, I’m sorry I didn’t enjoy this story more, but as this is a debut novel, I’m not necessarily deterred from checking out future titles released by this author as she hones her craft.

I received a copy of this novel from the publisher. This has not influenced the content of my review, which is my honest and unbiased opinion.

About the Author

Though she earned degrees in math and statistics, Leah Garriott lives for a good love story. She’s resided in Hawaii and Italy, walked the countryside of England, and owns every mainstream movie version of Pride and Prejudice. She’s currently living her own happily ever after in Utah with her husband and three kids. Leah is represented by Sharon Pelletier at Dystel, Goderich, and Bourret.

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One response to “Promised (Leah Garriott) – Review

  1. Leah Garriott

    Thanks for hosting this stop and taking the time to read and review the book.

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