Lioness: Mahlah’s Journey (Barbara M. Britton) – Review

Posted 28 October 2019 by Katie in Biblical Fiction, Christian Fiction, Historical, Review / 4 Comments


Title: 
Lioness: Mahlah’s Journey
Author: 
Barbara M. Britton
Genre: 
Biblical Fiction
Series: 
#1 Daughters of Zelophehad
Publisher:  
Harborlight Books
Release date: 
18 October 2019
Pages: 
253

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Lioness: Mahlah's Journey (Daughters of Zelophehad #1)


About the Book

While the Israelites struggle to occupy the Promised Land of God, Mahlah bat Zelophehad is orphaned and left to care for her four sisters. But daughters of the dead are unable to inherit land, and it will take a miracle for Mahlah to obtain the means to care for her sisters and uphold the vow she made to her dying mother.

Mahlah must seek Moses, the leader of her people, and request something extraordinary—the right for a daughter to inherit her deceased father’s land. A right that will upset the ox-cart of male inheritance and thrust her into the role of a rebel.

But, God is the protector of the orphan and the widow, and five orphaned daughters need His help. With God, anything is possible. Even changing man’s tradition.

Excerpt

Mahlah held her sixteen-year-old sister close. Noah’s head covering radiated the heat of the sun and warmed Mahlah’s cheek. “My heart rejoices that you are here now. I wished to warn you about the snakes, but I thought it best to go after Father.”
    “Then the rumors of rebellion are true?” Noah stepped backward and secured her whip. “Another shepherd told me our clan led the rioters.” Her dark eyes grew somber. “I didn’t want to believe it.”
    “‘Tis true. Father took his temper and insults to Moses.” Mahlah swept a tear from her face. “He is no more.”
    Noah’s chest sank to her belt. She tapped her fingers to her lips. “I did not believe he would act upon his utterances.”  She blinked. “I thought his harshness was for our ears.”
    “Your whole family is out of control. Rocks and whips.” Basemath stomped toward Mahlah. Rolling up her sleeve, she displayed a few small scratches. “My father will hear of this insult. I came at his urging to offer comfort to you and your sisters, and I was attacked.”
    “By what?” Noah crossed her arms. Leather bracelets covered both of her wrists. “A sparrow?”
    Giggles filled the small clearing.
    Not one sputter left Mahlah’s lips. She needed the support of Basemath’s father and brother. “I appreciated your father’s concern, but I will see to the well-being of my sisters.”
    “On whose authority?” Basemath showed little compassion.
    Noah rotated her whip. “Mahlah is the firstborn of Zelophehad.”
    Basemath took a step backward. All the while, she jabbed a finger at Mahlah’s face. “How can you lead a family? You are a woman with no husband. No one has even offered a marriage betrothal.”
    Could this troublemaker shout that truth any louder?
    “Someone will seek her. In time.” Noah seemed so sure of what Mahlah was not.
    Her neighbor barked out a laugh. “Not for a long time. Not after your father brought punishment on our tribe and others. Don’t you want Moses to bestow a blessing on our clan? Come under my father’s tent and all will be forgotten. He will offer a bride price for your sisters.”
    “And what will we do under your father’s tent?” Mahlah breathed deep and kept her feet firmly planted lest she lunge at Basemath. “Serve you and anyone your father deems worthy?” Her chest heaved. “Shall we forget we are the daughters of Zelophehad?” Her eyes welled to the brim at the mention of her father’s name.
    “What name do you want remembered?” Basemath opened her arm in the direction of two curious gawkers. “Nemuel or Zelophehad? The living or the dead?”
    “Zelophehad,” Noah shouted. Her glare glistened with grief, but it challenged anyone to defy her.

Review

Zelophehad’s daughters aren’t the most well-known of biblical characters, but I imagine they created quite a stir among the twelve tribes of Israel when they petitioned Moses to be able to inherit the land that would have been apportioned to their father. And that’s how Barbara M. Britton imagines it, too, in Lioness: Mahlah’s Journey, the story of Zelophehad’s eldest daughter. Not only was the idea of a female inheriting land revolutionary, but with no husband or father to either protect or speak for them, the daughters of Zelophehad are left in a difficult, sometimes perilous position, and Ms. Britton explores all of this in her novel.

This novel’s strengths are its sense of time and place. The realities of everyday life for this nomadic nation keep the story firmly anchored, and the issues the Israelites struggled with at the time (disobedience, grumbling, and pagan worship) form an authentic backdrop for everything that takes place. However, I felt the story would have been stronger if there had been some growth in Mahlah’s character across the course of the story rather than simply developments in her position and status. Likewise, there was very little development of the romance. At some points, I wondered whether one would develop at all, as the character in question didn’t seem to be particularly supportive of Mahlah.

Even so, this series will appeal to readers who enjoy seeing little-known biblical events brought to life with attention to historical detail and biblical accuracy. And I’m keen to read the next in the series after having met both characters in this novel—particularly Jeremiah, a young man who can neither hear nor speak.

I received a copy of this novel from the author. This has not influenced the content of my review, which is my honest and unbiased opinion.

About the Author

Barbara M. Britton lives in Wisconsin and loves the snow–when it accumulates under three inches. Barb writes romantic adventures from Ancient Israel to Modern Day USA and especially enjoys bringing little-known Bible characters to light. She has a nutrition degree from Baylor University but loves to dip healthy strawberries in chocolate. Barb is a member of the Society of Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators, Wisconsin Romance Writers of America, Romance Writers of America and American Christian Fiction Writers.

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4 responses to “Lioness: Mahlah’s Journey (Barbara M. Britton) – Review

  1. Thank you for the kind review of “Lioness.” I overlooked this story for too long. I am thankful I found these brave sisters, so I could share their story in my Biblical fiction. I couldn’t leave the girls after one book, so I wrote three.

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