About the Book
Noah bat Zelophehad has tended her father’s herds and flocks since she was a girl. With God’s gift of land, she plans to make her sisters wealthy with livestock. But when a conniving clansman takes a liking to the bold shepherdess, his scheme may snatch her from the fields she loves.
Only one person understands Noah’s gifts with the animals—Jeremiah, the mute shepherd who has been her field companion for years. After the walls of Jericho collapse, God stays silent in the battle of Ai, leaving Jeremiah wounded and Noah’s marital status in jeopardy. But, Noah remains faithful to God and her animals and trusts that she will be able to forge a future with her sisters, even when enemies abound.
Will the daughters of Zelophehad be able to settle their land together, or will Noah get left behind, trapped in the tent of a troublemaker?
Excerpt
Jeremiah knelt under the shade-giving branches, hunched near the rump of the camel. The mother’s grunts and head rears did not distract him from his duty. He would hear neither Noah’s calls, the slap of her sandals, nor the trumpet wail. The shrieks of the Canaanites and their judgment would be but a breeze upon his cheek. Perhaps today was not a bad day to be deaf and mute.
As she drew closer, a waft of blood and urine filled her nostrils. Her eyes watered. The air smelled like a slaughter.
She waved her arms to gain her fellow shepherd’s attention.
He glanced at her, but in in his eyes, the usual glisten of light brown sparks had disappeared.
On the ground, the calf’s front legs and head were visible. Hazy, white film covered the babe. The mother craned her neck and snorted. Her calf’s head jostled forward but did not shift farther out of the womb. Was the calf stuck?
Kneeling by her fellow shepherd, Noah brushed the thick shield of skin from the babe’s nose. The wet sheet clung to her hand. She stretched out her arms and motioned a pull. Her thumb indicated she would be the one to finish the birth. Surely, Jeremiah could see her arms were slighter than a man’s and would easily slip into the womb. Would he accept her help or be stubborn?
Jeremiah’s brow furrowed, his arms wrapped tight around the babe. He hesitated and tugged once more. Huffing, he released his hold and nodded toward the camel.
She grabbed the castoff birthing and rubbed it on her arms. Her stomach wretched at the feel and stench of the fluid. The sun’s heat did not help the odor either. The sour taste of grain sizzled on her tongue, tightening her jaw.
Staring at her, the babe’s brownish-black eyes beheld her as if she were its only hope.
“God is the give of life. Not me.” She brushed the soaked calf’s head with her fingers and slipped her hands in the camel’s womb. The mother attempted to kick. She mouthed a short prayer. “It will be over soon,” she said to the anxious camel. Hopefully, she spoke the truth.
Review
Having enjoyed getting to know Noah and Jeremiah in the previous book in this series, Lioness: Mahlah’s Journey, I was pleased to see them get their own story here, which plays out against the backdrop of the conquests of Jericho and Ai. I love the way these two understand each other—both emotionally and physically, in light of Jeremiah’s inability to either hear or speak—and from the first pages of this story, we also got to see how well they worked together, tending their livestock through everything from a difficult birth to keeping them safe from predators.
One of the most interesting things about this series is the way it explores what it would have been like to be a family of five daughters with no male “head” in a patriarchal society. It certainly left these women open to the machinations of unscrupulous men, though thankfully not all men abused their position. But if any women had the strength to stand tall and claim their inheritance, it was these daughters of Zelophehad.
Having already established their right to inherit their father’s allotment of land in the previous book in the series, there was more room to focus on the relationship between Noah and Jeremiah in this book (and even a little secondary romance going on). Readers who are particularly looking for romance will therefore find plenty to enjoy here, particularly as things took a somewhat surprising turn part way through the story.
One thing I would have liked to see, though, was for these characters to face internal struggles as well as external ones. How did the external struggles they encountered test or grow their faith? At times it felt to me as though the characters were a little too sharply defined as “good” characters or “bad” characters.
This would be a good choice for those looking for a combination of biblical fiction and romance, or even those simply looking for historical romance set in the ancient world.
I received a copy of this novel from the author. This has not influenced the content of my review, which is my honest and unbiased opinion.
Previous Books in the Series
Read my review for Lioness: Mahlah’s Journey
About the Author
Barbara M. Britton lives in Wisconsin and loves the snow–when it accumulates under three inches. Barb writes romantic adventures from Ancient Israel to Modern Day USA and especially enjoys bringing little-known Bible characters to light. She has a nutrition degree from Baylor University but loves to dip healthy strawberries in chocolate. Barb is a member of the Society of Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators, Wisconsin Romance Writers of America, Romance Writers of America and American Christian Fiction Writers.
Thank you for the wonderful review! These girls inspire me. I am so glad I finally found them in Scripture.