Deadly Deceit (Natalie Walters) – Review

Posted 27 November 2019 by Katie in Christian Fiction, Contemporary, Review, Romance, Suspense / 3 Comments


Title: 
Deadly Deceit
Author: 
Natalie Walters
Genre: 
Romantic Suspense
Series: 
#2 Harbored Secrets
Publisher: 
Revell
Release date: 
5 November 2019
Pages: 
318

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Deadly Deceit (Harbored Secrets, #2)


About the Book

Independent and tenacious journalist Vivian DeMarco is back in Walton, Georgia, for one reason–to do her job and get out. When her boss suddenly dies under suspicious circumstances, Vivian’s only hope for finding the truth–and the next big story–is small-town law enforcement’s lanky poster boy, Deputy Ryan Frost. But the deeper they dig, the more twisted the truth becomes, and Vivian finds herself fighting for not only answers but also her life. False leads, incriminating emails, and someone called The Watcher force Vivian to confront the secret of her past and decide: How much is she willing to risk for the sake of a headline?

Author Natalie Walters welcomes you back to Walton, Georgia, where everyone knows your name–but no one knows your secret.

Excerpt

Harold coughed again. “Yes, dear. I know it’s late, but I need your help.”
    A tingle of worry spread through Vivian’s chest at his ominous tone. “Are you okay?”
    “Oh, yes, dear.” He cleared his throat. “They used quite a lot of pyrotechnics at the game. Some of the smoke must be bothering my throat. I’ll be at the house in ten minutes.”
    “Harold, are you sure this can’t wait until tomorrow? I’ll even stop by the Way Station Cafè and pick up some cinnamon rolls. Plus, since Carol’s out of town, you won’t get into trouble.”
    Harold laughed, but it came out choked. “I’ve got a marmalade dropper, and I think . . . I think it’s the story you’ve been waiting on.”
    Vivian sat forward. “Marmalade dropper” was Harold’s unique way to tell her he had a story. A big one. But even if he hadn’t used his familiar phrase, the fact that he suggested this was her story captured her curiosity instantly.
    “Why? What’s the story?”
    “Vivi, I’ll tell you at the house. Please.”
    Her heart pulled at the sound of the nickname Harold had dubbed her with almost as soon as she began working for him—ignoring her insistence that her name was “just Vivian.” Nicknames were familiar. Familiarity meant affection. And affection was harmful. Still, she couldn’t ignore the strain in his voice.
    “Fine.” She closed her laptop and grabbed her keys. “I’ll be there in fifteen minutes.”
    Ford Avenue was congested with game-night traffic. Vehicles covered in cheers for the Cougars written in shoe polish on their windows honked playfully at residents young and old as they waved their red and silver banners in the air. Kids with faces painted like the school mascot rode on their dads’ shoulders or tugged their moms in the direction of Sandy’s Ice Cream Shop, which apparently had extended its hours in honor of the win. The town was alive with celebration.
    It was all a pitiful reminder of just how lame Vivian was.
    Several blocks farther down, Vivian turned into The Landing, a subdivision of stately homes with wraparound porches and wide lawns manicured to HOA standards. She parked behind Harold’s white Volvo on Marshford Avenue, the light from his living room illuminating the path up to his porch.
    Vivian knocked on the door. What kind of marmalade was important enough for her to be standing here this late at night? She didn’t have a clue. This was Walton, Georgia, where people lived happily ever after. The words she had typed earlier came back to her. She’d been in the news industry long enough to know there was no such thing.
    Vivian knocked again, then moved to the front window and peeked in. Her heart stopped at the sight of his body crumpled on the floor.

Review

Natalie Walters has delivered another intriguing romantic suspense story, with journalist Vivian DeMarco and Deputy Ryan Frost seeking to uncover the identity of The Watcher—a highly tech-savvy blackmailer who is targeting and setting up his blackmail victims. But what does that have to do with the death of Vivian’s boss, Harold Kennedy? And what’s the common link between the other victims? It’s a knotty problem to unravel and definitely kept me reading, but I couldn’t help feeling this story wasn’t quite as strong as Walters’ first.

Before I get to that—some other positives: I loved Ryan in the first book of this series, so I was excited to have him featured as the hero here. There were also plenty of family dynamics in the story, for those who enjoy that. The relationship between Ryan and his younger sister, Frannie, was entertaining, and both Ryan and Vivian had some serious issues to work through, particularly in relation to their fathers.

The drawbacks for me: The romantic tension felt manufactured at times, and when all was said and done, I thought the motive for the blackmailer was a little far-fetched. The plot also seemed a bit untidy as it unfolded. I’m not sure whether I can explain it any better than that without giving spoilers, but I had some minor plot questions the story didn’t answer, and there were other pieces of the puzzle that I had to turn around and study in my mind before I could see how they fit together, even after the story ended.

Those things notwithstanding, this was a read that kept my attention right to the end and is sure to please many romantic suspense lovers.

I received a copy of this novel from the publisher. This has not influenced the content of my review, which is my honest and unbiased opinion.

About the Author

Natalie Walters is a military wife of 22 years and currently resides in Hawaii with her soldier husband and their three kids. She writes full-time and has been published in Proverbs 31 magazine and has blogged for Guideposts online. In addition to balancing life as a military spouse, mom, and writer, she loves connecting on social media, sharing her love of books, cooking, and traveling. Natalie comes from a long line of military and law enforcement veterans and is passionate about supporting them through volunteer work, races, and writing stories that affirm no one is defined by their past.

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