The power of fiction, the beauty of words, and the God who made us to wield them for His glory.

Word Painting – Sometimes it’s the Little Words

I love a good metaphor, don’t you? Have a look at this sentence I read recently in the upcoming release The Silver Suitcase by Terrie Todd: She lay awake far too long, trying in vain to push waves of grief back into the vast ocean called Sorrow. There is such a sense of hopelessness embodied in this imagery (especially when it ends the chapter, like it does in this book).  You don’t have to have been to a beach to know the impossibility of trying to stop waves from coming to shore; the relentless incursion. But do you notice that

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Just Two Little Words

They’re just two little words, but when I see them written together at the beginning of a sentence it’s like hitting a pothole: Just then … I don’t know whether it’s just me, but I find that a really lame way to begin a sentence.  Just then X walked into the room,  Just then there was a knock at the door,  Just then I had a thought. The phrase ‘just then’ is kind of redundant when you think about it.  Of course it happened just then, otherwise it wouldn’t have been written there.  What’s wrong with just saying X walked

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