Shadow Among Sheaves (Naomi Stephens) – Review + Giveaway

Posted 2 May 2019 by Katie in Christian Fiction, Historical, Review, Romance / 9 Comments


Title: 
Shadow Among Sheaves
Author: 
Naomi Stephens
Genre: 
Historical Romance
Publisher:   
Shiloh Run Press
Release date: 
1 April 2019
Pages: 
320

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Shadow Among Sheaves


About the Book

A Timeless, Beautiful Allegory of the Biblical Love Story of Ruth and Boaz

The Great Rebellion of 1857 was a remarkably bloody business. At a time when Britain’s imperial influence in India was sparking brutal clashes on both sides, no one could have expected Rena, an Indian woman, to marry a British officer—nor do they understand her decision to follow her mother-in-law to England after her husband’s tragic death. 

Once the two widows are in Abbotsville, the stern yet compassionate Lord Barric attempts to help them despite his better judgment. Soon he is torn between the demands of reputation and his increasing desire to capture Rena’s heart for his own.

Excerpt

She smiled, stepping closer and placing her hand on the horse’s wet snout. Samson was a pretty beast with wide, ponderous eyes and a few splotches of gray around his nose. The soft puff of air Samson snorted into her palm brought a delighted smile to her lips, and she gasped as he bowed his neck to nuzzle his nose against her stomach. She felt her smile leap into a grin. It was a delightful change, to feel joy so deep it finally showed.
    Barric circled around Samson to stand beside her, his hands never leaving the reins. “He’s fond of you,” he remarked as Samson dropped his snout against her hip.
    “Unsurprising, I suppose. Though he could also be searching you for a carrot.”
    Surprised to hear Lord Barric speak so teasingly, and pleased by the gentle light she found in his otherwise tired eyes, Rena laughed her faint agreement. “That will teach me to come empty-handed, won’t it?”
    Their smiles both dropped as a young, lanky stable hand came rushing out to take Samson, and Barric relinquished his hold on the reins, nodding his silent thanks.
    As soon as the stable boy had disappeared with Samson, Barric glanced back at Rena. “Are you going home?” he asked, nodding toward the dusty road looping down the hill to William’s house.
    She stepped back, realizing she had dawdled longer than she’d first intended. “Yes,” she answered. “I often come this way to avoid the other workers.”
    
“Might I walk with you?” He turned to hang his whip on a peg. “Just a short stretch of the road?”
    Stunned by his request, and a bit suspicious of his motive, she nonetheless nodded. “Yes, of course.”
    Barric drew up beside her, his even strides betraying no unease, though he was silent for some time as they made their way down the golden-colored hill.
    “You have seemed tired these past few days,” he observed. Rena did not bother to deny it. She’d been working hard to keep up with the others, as Barric had told her she must, and felt wearier for it. She had tried to split her days in half, the mornings spent binding sheaves with the women and the afternoons spent picking for her own stores, but the work was backbreaking, and, as he had already pointed out once before, she was not used to hard labor. “I realize I haven’t really asked you how you are settling in,” he went on.
    “Perhaps you’ve been too busy provoking me,” she answered before she could stop herself.
    Barric’s eyebrow inched up as he slanted an approving smirk down at her. “Perhaps.”
    Rena cursed her honest tongue. She must have been more tired than she thought, to speak so freely to a man of title. “I have been well,” she tried again, a bit more diplomatically. “The house suits us, if that is what you are asking.”
    “The people here do not speak to you unkindly?”
    “The people do not speak to me at all.” She had meant to sound casual, unaffected, but heard the hurt in her own voice she hadn’t been able to weed out. As Barric’s expression tightened, she hastened to amend, “Except for you, my lord. Of course. And the Wilmots.”
    “They are good people,” he agreed quietly. “And will you be coming with them to the festival this evening?”
    She hesitated. According to Alice, harvest home was a yearly tra¬dition, a night of raucous drinking and dancing to celebrate the close of the harvest. All of Abbotsville would be there—landowners, stewards, even tenant farmers and common laborers. But Rena was none of those things, and she and Barric both knew it.
    “Come,” Barric teased, “do not tell me you are afraid to go. I would never have thought it of you.”
    “I am not afraid,” she insisted. “I just had not thought about it.”
    At her defensive tone, he smiled—a true smile—one that pinched the corners of his eyes and pressed grooves along the outer edges of his mouth. “You ought to come,” he decided. “Everyone in Abbotsville is welcome, and many are the men who would feel lucky to dance with you.”
    But, of course, Lord Barric knew this was not true. The men in his fields regarded her mostly with contempt and made no secret of it—they would not count themselves at all lucky to dance with her. Was Lord Barric trying to offer her words of comfort? Or was he trying to convey a message?
    Did he want to dance with her?
    This was hardly a safe question, and so she asked another. “Do you dance, Lord Barric?”
    When he met her gaze, so direct, she was all the more glad she had not stammered in her reply. The man walked a dangerous line whenever he deigned to speak to her. Far too close, she’d think, and then stern enough to cool her blood with a word.
    He surprised her with another smile, this one a faint twist at the corner of his lips. “Perhaps you would have to come to find out.”

Review

What a fantastic idea for a book! The story of Ruth and Boaz has to be one of the most beautiful and well-loved stories in the Bible, and I love the idea of retelling that story in a different time and place. This particular time and setting worked really well because Rena’s situation brought out similar racial, cultural, and religious issues to those Ruth would have struggled with as a Moabitess trying to assimilate into Jewish culture. It was interesting, too, to learn a little bit about Indian culture, particularly the stigma surrounding widows.

That said, there was one scene that I felt didn’t translate well from Ruth and Boaz’s story. Whereas this scene had cultural significance in the original story, it didn’t do credit to either character in this setting, and I think the story would have been better served by retaining the spirit rather than the specifics of the original.

I also found myself getting a little angry with the hero at times. To put it bluntly, he could be a jerk. He was something of a Darcy figure in that his attraction butted against his better judgment, though Barric was even less the gentleman than Darcy on occasion. Yet there were enough glimpses of the decent, steadfast soul behind that exterior that I couldn’t totally dislike him. On the whole, I would have to say I was intrigued by the contradictions in Barric’s character more than I was irritated by them, but if you’re expecting Lord Barric’s character to be modelled after Boaz, you may be disappointed.

Despite these observations, I thought this story was well written, and I found myself thoroughly invested, reluctant to put it down once I’d been drawn in. There is a lovely cadence to Naomi Stephens’ writing, and I hope I’ll be able to read more from her in the future.

I received a copy of this novel from the publisher. This has not influenced the content of my review, which is my honest and unbiased opinion.

About the Author

Naomi Stephens is a bookworm turned teacher turned writer. She received a B.A. in English from Concordia University in Ann Arbor, and an M.A. in English from Indiana University-Purdue University Fort Wayne. 

In bookstores, Naomi gravitates towards 19th-century British novels—the broodier the better (i.e., Jane Eyre)—but she can also be found perusing the young adult, mystery, and fantasy sections. Anything that keeps her turning pages past midnight.

Though she has called many places home over the years, she currently lives in Ohio with her husband, her two children, and a rascal of a dog named Sherlock. When not writing or having adventures with her family, she can be found drinking tea, practicing photography, and pining for London.

Connect with Naomi:  Website  |  Facebook  |  Twitter

Tour Giveaway

To celebrate her tour, Naomi is giving away a grand prize of a $25 Amazon gift card and a finished paperback copy of Shadow Among Sheaves!!

Be sure to comment on the blog stops for nine extra entries into the giveaway! Click the link below to enter. https://promosimple.com/ps/deb9/shadow-among-sheaves-celebration-tour-giveaway

9 responses to “Shadow Among Sheaves (Naomi Stephens) – Review + Giveaway

  1. The premise of this book is fascinating to me. I’ve heard mixed reviews but would still like to try it out for myself sometime. Thanks, Katie!

  2. Winnie Thomas

    Thanks for your review, Katie! I’ve seen this book floating around the blogisphere. It looks and sounds intriguing.

  3. carylkane

    Katie, thank you for your review! Boaz and Ruth’s story is one of my favorites. I’m looking forward to reading Naomi’s version.

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